Narrative

It was a sunny afternoon. Zack, who was 10 years old, went to Sunny Side Zoo with his parents. They were having lunch at the park near the tough gorillas.

‘’Can I see the gorillas ?’’ asked Zack.

‘’Okay,’’ said Mum. ‘’But be quick. We're going soon after I have packed our lunch.’’

Zack walked happily to the gorillas. As he crossed the wooden bridge, Zack was so excited to see their black angry faces. “WOW!” he said happily.

As he leaned closer, Zack fell off the bridge.

When the gorilla looked up Zack was so scared.

He yelled, ‘’Mum! Dad! Help!"

When his parents heard the frightened sound, Zack’s mum was really worried.They went to see what had happened.

The gorillas had crawled closer. They were growling seriously, and Zack was nearly attacked by their knuckle claws. 
Zack’s mum was yelling for a zoo keeper. “Help! My son is in the gorillas' enclosure.”

When the zookeeper came, he asked, “What happened?”

“My son! He’s down there with the gorillas,” Mum said.

As the zoo keeper walked down with food, Zack was so glad that he had gone down to help him get away from those angry black gorillas. 
“Thank you,” said Zack, gratefully.

As they walked back on the bridge, Zack hugged his parents and thanked the zoo keeper, then they headed home.